None of my friend's are really in the Filmmaking Field right now, so I was wondering if I could get some feedback from people actually in that kind of community, (like this site.)
Specifically; a brief overview of what you thought of it as a whole,
Tips on improving dialogue scenes,
And advice on how to make a scene feel natural.
( For Example: Guy walks up to a microphone to speak and it screech's at him in a sound problem, before he adjusts it then starts talking.) Things that feel natural, and feel like they would actually happen during a normal day.
Here it is:
Is a hippopotamus a opotamus, or a really hip opotamus?