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Editing Treacherously: T3D – Edit in Progress (10 posts)

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  • Avatar Image John P. Hess said 7 months, 3 weeks ago:

    Generally I would never show it this rough. But I figured this would make good internet reading. So you’re going to get a front row seat to the progression of the edit step by step.

    To see the original script and a Behind the Scenes look at the shoot

    Here is an incredibly rough assembly of footage to get a feel of where I’m going.


    password: rufusrocks

    I’m going to write more VO to fill the long empty gaps

    Comments are welcomed.

    All my Best,
    John Hess
    Creative Industries Media Group | GospelJohn.net
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  • Avatar Image Simon Hosick said 7 months, 3 weeks ago:

    I love that deep desaturation and the jokes were pretty funny. Technically, I can’t be sure but I think I heard a whine in some of the scenes and I think that there’s room for a cutaway to a high heel at the beginning.

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  • Avatar Image John P. Hess said 7 months, 3 weeks ago:

    The audio is all over the place and will need a good scrubbing – that’s for sure

    Some may also get covered up when music is applied.

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  • Avatar Image Thurman Dalrymple, Jr. said 7 months, 3 weeks ago:

    I have some ideas for the VO if you’re interested. Ed- you gotta love him.
    Like Simon mentioned- the deep desaturation was incredible (even though it makes my nose look very weird). Nice work John.

    thurmanTV.com – http://www.imdb.me/thurmandal – http://www.youtube.com/atwinman
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  • Avatar Image Thurman Dalrymple, Jr. said 7 months, 1 week ago:

    I can’t stop watching this- even though it’s not complete. (I usually get increasingly annoyed when watching myself on film. But I have to say it again, not this time) Thank you John.

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  • Avatar Image John P. Hess said 7 months, 1 week ago:

    I think at this point you’ve seen it more than I have… I get to rarely look it these days

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  • Avatar Image Thurman Dalrymple, Jr. said 7 months ago:

    We should have had your camera running during the VO last night. That may (or may not) have been interesting.

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  • Avatar Image Thurman Dalrymple, Jr. said 6 months, 1 week ago:

    Music!! Music! This film needs a music! Background music, sound effects, YES!

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  • Avatar Image John P. Hess said 6 months, 1 week ago:

    @thurman said:
    Music!! Music! This film needs a music! Background music, sound effects, YES!

    I roughed the score for the first scene – minor blues progression which was really hard for me to figure out but it sounds cool.

    Slowly but surely.

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  • Avatar Image Anthony Law Liddle said 6 months, 1 week ago:

    Can’t wait to see the finished product! :D

    “The first thing a writer should be is – excited. He should be a thing of fevers and enthusiasms. Without such vigor, he might as well be out picking peaches or digging ditches; God knows it’s better for his health.” -Ray Bradbury
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