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drake said 3 months, 2 weeks ago:

My buddy and I are working on a short film I wrote called Blue Sapphires. Its about a man struggling with the death of his wife. She was killed by a drunk driver.

We have found we really messed up the first scene with forgetting to add a main prop and also left a pop can in the shot haha.

But before we continue any farther does it look alright? Or do you have some ideas to make it look better like different shot ideas or more camera movement? Thanks for the help guys.

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Simon Hosick said 3 months, 2 weeks ago:

I noticed the siren at the end cuts, I’d recomend having it fade. Ita was also a little too washed out, it was probably the look you were going for, I’d just prefer a little more midtone.

Other than that, it’s great.

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drake said 3 months, 2 weeks ago:

Thank you Simon. Pointing that out I agree. I’ll get those corrected.

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