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  • Hey filmmakers, I would love to get your feedback on my new shorts. Get in touch and I’ll happily watch anything you’ve created too.

    Dysphoria –

    Bad Dream? –

    Lament –

    Recrement –

    All the best!

    • This topic was modified 1 year, 5 months ago by Avatar of John P. Hess John P. Hess.

    These are all so dreary. If you want to expand as a filmmaker, you should try expanding into a different topic besides suicide. Interesting side note… The Hays Office which censored films in the studio era had a rule AGAINST using suicide as a way to end the story. Not saying you should censor yourself but having the limitation forces creativity.

    I would challenge you to make a comedy… Using the same story ideas but find the comedy underneath. It will force you to try to find new ways of taping the emotions you want to convey.

    • This reply was modified 1 year, 5 months ago by Avatar of HELARY HELARY.
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