A short film for directing class.
Not too bad – I think the one thing you need to work on is developing a better and more coherent sense of pacing. It’s hard to describe exactly but after you’ve seen your film enough times it should begin to have a musical quality. Tempo should ramp up and down but it should make sense.
You film here bounces around a lot from slow to fast – a lot of shots go on longer than they need to.
Focus on pacing and I think you’ll see huge improvements in your films!
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