A short film I made recently that I hope makes you laugh a little! I am really hoping to improve my skills, so please, if you watch it, let me know what you like or dislike about it.
Nicely done. I had to watch it twice to understand what your payoff was. That shot of the stand that’s closed is a bit obscure and its a little tricky to figure out what’s going on (part of that is so dark).
But the best part of your film (and why I had to watch it again to see what I missed) is the combination of the music and visuals. You have such a happy-go-lucky guy with such pensive music that you know something heartbreaking is about to happen… That tension is a great device and done really well with the dirty shorts and angular editing.
I almost cried at the end… It was closed… I really liked it. I think it is a good plot, great music choice. My only complaint would be the credits. Really pink and glowy. Didn´t like that.
Thanks for the feedback, I definitely need to work on my lighting and pacing, but it is really nice to see a positive response to the short as a whole. Geo, you’re right about the title, it was my first time working with Adobe Premiere, so I indulged in the title options.
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