Example of Bad Screenwriting: Star Wars Episode III
Robert McKee explains; “If the scene is about what the scene is about, you’re in deep shit.” Just to drive the point home “Star Wars Episode III Revenge Of The Sith” is offered up as an example of this bad screenwriting practice.
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I had to read “If the scene is about what the scene is about, you’re in deep shit.” a few times to understand that. Watching the video helped, and spruced up my screenplay.